Dec
2011
Use email subject lines to open doors
Knock, knock.
Who’s there?
Santa.
Santa who?
Santa email but you never opened it.
Does your email stand out in your prospect’s Inbox with a clear, attention-grabbing subject line? If not, your killer email won’t ever be opened, never mind read. Your prospects are crazy-busy, says sales expert Jill Konrath. They’ll likely spend 2.7 seconds—tops—evaluating your email. Make sure your subject line instantly conveys the value of your message to the reader.
Creating email subject lines can be intimidating. However, it need not be if you follow four guiding principles.
Guiding Principle #1: Start your conversation in the subject line.
Treat your email subject line more like a conversation starter than an article headline. Ask yourself, what is the first sentence I would say to this person if I were meeting him or her in person?
If this is the first time you sent email to the prospect, identify who you are in the subject line by stating your connection upfront. If you’re connecting through a mutual contact, be sure to state the person’s name in the subject line.
Examples:
- Subject: Saw this blog post and thought of you
- Subject: Enjoyed meeting you at Sales 2.0
- Subject: Bumped into Sue Johnson…
Guiding Principle #2: Be personal.
Subject lines are instantly more personal simply by keeping the tone casual and including the pronoun “you”. Be conversational—don’t capitalize each word like you might for the title of a paper.
Examples:
- Subject: You asked an interesting question
- Subject: Your ears should be ringing
Guiding Principle #3: Offer something of value.
Sharing timely, relevant information helps prospects want to engage with you. If a web site visitor converts after downloading a white paper, for example, seize the opportunity to offer your insights into the business issues likely inspiring the prospect to download the white paper in the first place.
Note: People generally do value “free” and you can use the word in subject lines without triggering spam filters as long as it’s not capitalized, the first word or used in conjunction with an exclamation point.
Examples:
- Subject: Here’s my aha after reading the GIS report
- Subject: Determine your co’s readiness using free assessment
Guiding Principle #4: Make the reader curious to learn more.
Clever subject lines pique interest and so does compelling content. Ideally, your email is comprised of both. However, rather than getting stuck striving to be oh-so clever in the 50-60 characters of most subject lines, focus your efforts on being relevant. Appeal to your prospect’s natural curiosity about content:
- they’ve expressed interest in
- aligned with their business objectives
- linked to a current frustration or common industry challenge
- educating them to work smarter and faster (How-to’s)
- keeping them current with trending topics
- providing perspective for reflection
Examples:
- Subject: What your peers are saying about the GIS report
- Subject: New benchmarking data to plan 2012
- Subject: How to turn social media into sales
- Subject: Your competition is in the news
- Subject: Metrics to optimize your supply chain
Writing email subject lines that open doors requires doing the homework a good salesperson must always do to earn the first meeting. Your email subject lines will open doors when you convey to the reader you know their personal interests; understand their pain points, tune into their specific business priorities; want them to succeed; are in-the-know; and offer a balanced viewpoint.
Bottom line: Pay attention to the subject lines of emails your prospects open and those they don’t. Experiment over time and you’ll improve your “door-opening” and email-opening rate.
Ever wonder why your email wasn’t opened? Take a second look at the subject line.
P. S. Email subject lines must pass through your crazy-busy prospect’s relevance-for-me filter AND also through software filters—or they won’t even land in your prospect’s Inbox. It’s worth the extra minute or two it takes to test your subject lines using free analyzers available on the web that check for clarity, wordiness and likelihood of triggering spam filters. Testing programs aren’t perfect; use their feedback to make quick tweaks. For example, we choose to override suggestions to omit personal pronouns like “you” in subject lines because using “you” feels…well, personal.
Here’s one free testing program you can try: Free Lyris ContentChecker for Email














