Dec
2011
My prospect doesn’t read my email – how do I engage them?
An email at the top of the funnel is a compressed version of a face-to-face chat that you wish you could have. To be effective, you need to combine:
- A pleasant hello (Subject Line)
- One simple concept that someone wants to understand (Body)
- A non-threatening way for someone to learn more (Additional Content via link or attachment)
Just like in the real-world, there are subtleties in the approach and execution of each of these that can lead to great success or complete failure.
Creating email subject lines can be intimidating. However, it need not be if you follow four guiding principles:
#1: Start your conversation in the subject line.
#2: Be personal.
#3: Offer something of value.
#4: Make the reader curious to learn more.
See our full blog post on subject lines.
EMAIL BODIES
Most email bodies at the top of the funnel fail because they include too much marketing gobbledygook and they assume that your prospect cares about you or your offering. They don’t. They simply care about meeting their own goals and learning more about their areas of interest. Here are the key things you should do here:
#1: Pick one concept to share
#2: Convey it simply and clearly
#3: Plant a seed with a 1 sentence value proposition
#4: Be brutal when editing (based on an honest assessment from an external source)
Of the above items, the most important is the last one. Listen to someone you trust answer the question “How would you react to this?” or use one of the tools from a market-leader, like:
- David Meerman Scott’s Gobbledygook Grader – http://gobbledygook.grader.com/
- Jill Konrath’s Value Proposition Generator – http://snapselling.com/resources/
ADDITIONAL CONTENT
When it comes to additional content, it’s hard to predict what the prospect really wants and how much time they really want to invest. The best approach is to combine:
- One short and focused item that you link to or attach that is an extension of the concept from the email body
- Within that one shared item (not in your email), you can also provide a few other links to other items that might pique their interest.
Think of it like the tasty morsel you are offered while wandering in the food court—you want them to take a bite and then take a look at other things that might be of interest. Patience here is critical—push too hard and they are gone.
Emails are more engaging when your message succinctly offers value, is conversational in tone and piques their interest with additional supporting content references.













